Restructuring Hong Kong’s Economic through Innovation

Now, here comes an editing of my term paper. My university professor assigned a term paper, and I could choose any topic related to economics. Therefore I chose ” Restructuring Hong Kong’s Economic through Innovation”, and before that he required students to submit Literature Review and Data Analysis as you could see in the attached file, there are 2 files, the one with the term paper topic is what I wrote and submitted. The other one is the analytical chapter he lectured about his requirements in the term paper.

Then he sent back some feedbacks about where should be improved and corrected:
“Your topic should be restructuring of the Hong Kong economy, but your review does not correspond to that. It is rather an overview of how important the relations with mainland China are, which is almost unrelated to your topic. In the review, summarize the articles dealing with the same topic (changes to Hong Kong economy due to innovations) to see the state of the current knowledge. You have it in the analytical chapter, place the relevant parts in the review. I highly suggest focusing your paper more, e.g. only on innovations in the retail sector (which is the only part of your analysis, where I see some restructuring due to innovations) to provide more in-dept analysis.
Development of Hong Kong economy in the first part of the data analysis, the FDI part as well as the global trade part seem to be redundant concerning your topic (restructuring due to innovations).

Explain better table 2 (innovation inputs and outputs).

Place the titles above the charts/tables.

The bubble chart reffered to on the page 5 is missing. Remove the background colour of table 3.”

Do you think it is possible for you to help me edit it? Also, he required at least 2 sources must be from OECD, IMF or JSTOR. He required students to also give at least 6 data analysis which means 6 tables, charts or any economic indicators but must be redone by own-self, cannot copy and paste. I have had some analysis, but I believe if you could edit and make it better, it will be appreciated. Please let me know if you could manage it and let me know also if you have anymore questions. Please note that, his feedbacks are very important, hopefully you could correct it right.

Extra bonus will be paid.