Revise body paragraphs of research paper per instructions
Revise 4 paragraphs on pages 6 through 8 in the attached document, to ensure that the following are included, in the specific order:
o Sentence 1: Point/reason sentence: This topic sentence will contain one of your reasons.
o Sentence 2: Explanation: In this sentence, you will provide information that further develops or explains Sentence 1.
o Sentence 3: Illustration: This sentence introduces evidence that supports the reason that is presented in Sentence 1.
o Sentence 4: Explanation of the illustration: Because the evidence does not necessarily stand on its own, you need to provide explanation so that the reader will understand how you interpreted the evidence to come to your reason.
o Sentences 5-6: Second illustration and explanation – this is a second piece of evidence that is then followed by an explanation.
o Last Sentence: Transition: In this sentence, you will signal to the reader that you will be moving on to another point in the next paragraph. You do this to ease the movement from one point to another.
o Paragraphs need to be focused on only one main idea
o Add some headings and subheadings to the paragraphs to help your reader understand the organization
o Examine the sentences to make sure that each one is clear, concise, forceful and free of mistakes
